Rough Cut 1 - Feedback
Feedback
Please put rough cut one onto your group blog (embed it) and add the following feedback underneath:
What worked well:
* News report is good and believable
*Film title font looks brilliant
*The scrolling through the phone and likes is excellent - lovely shot
* Good non-diegetic sound (is it non-copyright?)
Even Better If:
* You use your own footage throughout the film opening
* Make the narrative clearer - you don;t need the section at the beginning with Ryan
* You need titles in there
* You show the narrative clearly to your audience
Please act on this advice ready for your rough cut 2 and final film
Cameron Eade
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